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 Post subject: Sorienna Archrion. "For The Greater Good!"
PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2011 11:46 am 
Youngest daughter of the nefarious Geis Archrion and esoteric Achaia Cala'elen, Sorienna has spent most of her life growing up with her twin brother on a remote island in relative peace. She grew up believing that her father worked hard for the greater good of Azeroth and felt deeply disillusioned when she learned for herself what sort of elf he really is. She has spent several years in hiding, running and fighting from the troubles her family and questionable friends have caused, whilst trying in vain to become a magister at the Spire. Following a serious injury acquired during the Scourge attack on Ogrimmar she took it upon herself to train as a Blood Knight. Her first regiment assignment was to a unit whose reputation is notorious throughout Quel'thalas. She has recently been recalled to Silvermoon to continue her adept training.



General Description:
Height: 5'10" 177.8 cms
Weight: 12.5st 175lbs 79.4kg

Sorienna has old burns and scars all over her face and body. She has a lithe but slightly brawny build. Her body shape is more suited to an athletic male than a young female. She seems quite flat chested, her shoulders are broad and her waist narrow. She has a boyish round face which has a generous scattering of red freckles. Her lips are small but round with a natural red flush to them. She never wears make up or colour on her skin. The ends of her copper red hair are usually singed and cut unevenly. Her normal speaking voice is quite low and soft, however when she becomes excitable it rises in pitch and volume.

Clothing:

Sorienna wears armour that is clean but not shining. She has a utility belt which has various canisters and gadgets attached to it. She wears a chain mail jerkin and leggings underneath the plate, then a full leather set under that. Under her helm she wears a an open faced leather cowl. Lastly under the leather she wears black cloth tunic and leggings. She never wears, nor has need for a bra. She wears odd coloured studs in her ears. The left is green and the right purple. A closer inspection of them will reveal that they are scrygems and worn only for their practical purpose.

Other old scars:
Sorienna has a large scar on the left of her neck and a scar slashed across the back of her neck. There is a scar from a puncture wound on her left side. She has a feint scar on her left cheek just under her eye. There is an old but deep C shaped scar on her right thigh. She is also scarred on across her back with a large faded slash running diagonally down from left to right.

Magiks and such:

More often than not Sori maintains her retribution aura. In times of high stress she will shift this to provide herself with some protection from fire. Those attuned to such things may sense her affinity to the magiks of the light as well as the underlying and suppressed pyromancing skills. A fading echo of arcane ability remains.

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The Spire Files: Files held by the Magisterum following Sorienna's training.
Name: Sorienna Archrion.

Date: Year 31 - Spring
Initial assessment:
Adolescant presenting for training. Has little or no understanding of sin'dorei society or protocol. Has had no formal education. Untrained and undisciplined. Exceptional raw talent. Has potential to be a powerful pyromancer. Commence training at once to contain the subject. Has a distraction for mechanics.

Side note:
Cross reference with files on Geis Archrion and Achaia Cala'elen.
Monitor with prejudice.


Date: Year 31 - Summer
Review:
Issues with finding a mentor. Subject is wild and unfocused.
Raw talent is channeling in to true power. Maintain training.
Discourage the distraction of mechanics. Contain the subject.

Side note:
Family troubles causing continued absence.
Monitor with prejudice.

Date: Year 31 - Autumn
Review:
Subject has become rebellious in the face of discipline. Seems unable to accept structure. Lack of formal education is clear. Has a good grasp of spell crafting basics. Lacks the understanding and intelligence for deeper mechanics. Uses natural instinct. Is channeling arcane in to her mechanical creations. Needs to be controlled.

Side note:
Family troubles causing continued absence.
Monitor with prejudice.

Date: Year 31 - Winter
Report:
Subject has taken interest with one Setharoth Shadowhand. Cross reference files.

Date: Year 32 - Spring
Report:
Subject has begun operating in the orc city. Engineering has become an interference.
Recover subject. Contain and control.

Date: Year 32 - Summer
Report:
Subject has begun studies with Magister Sevarus Longstaff. Seems to be taking more active control of powers. Subject may yet reach true potential.

Side note:
Family activity has lessened.

Date: Year 32 (day of the frostwyrm attack on Orgrimmar)
Report:
Absent Without Leave.

Date: Year 32 (two days later)
Report:
Presumed dead following reports of a scourge attack on the orc city.
Scout reports subject's workshop destroyed.

Side note:
Death of mother and brother Zoah Archrion have been reported.
Cross reference scout's file. Name: Kelu Meleth'raes.

Date: Year 32 (one day later)
Report:
Second scout report confirms workshop destruction. Subject is in the care of the trolls. Has suffered near fatal injuries. Transfer care to a sun priestess.

Date: Year 32 (two weeks later)
Report:
Subject in the care of Sun Priestess Ros'Vorontir in Thunder Bluff. This is unacceptable. Return both subject and priestess to the spire.

Side note: Investigate Priestess Ros'Vorontir. Cross reference all files.

Date: Year 33 - Spring
Report:
Subject has returned. Has completely lost direction. Constant questions of the power of the light. Has taken up independent physical training. Is showing interest in The Blood knight Order. Displays loyalty to one Centurion Sithren Strifeheart.

Recommendation:
Allow basic training. Assign to The Sunfire Vanguard if subject proves capable.
Strifeheart has direct knowledge and experience of subjects history.
Monitor with prejudice. Contain and control.

Side note:
Responsibility transferred to The Order.
FILE CLOSED


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Name: Geis Archrion

Criminal Record:
Imprisonment on five occasions, twice under Arcane Stasis, for charges throughout life of -
Serial murder
Conspiracy to murder and torture
Conspiracy to create weapons of mass destruction
High ranking organiser of infamous underground group, The Essence
Corruption of justice
Grand theft
Manslaughter
Grievous Bodily Harm
Kidnapping
Defilement of property
Smuggling
Trade of illegal substances
Resisting Authorities

"Several records are censored"
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Name: Achaia Archrion
Maiden name: Cala'elen

Criminal Record:
Breaking and Entering
Theft
Murder
Assault
Assault on an Officer of the Horde
Assault on a Military building
Conspiracy
Treason
Disturbing the Peace
Smuggling
Resisting Authorities

"Several records are censored"
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Name: XXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXX - Kelu Meleth'raes
Residence: Silvermoon City

Services to Orgrimmar: xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Soldier

Services to Silvermoon: Apothecary
Courier
Soldier
xxxxxxxx
"Much of the information has been censored."

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Name: Nirenya Ros'Vorontir
Residence: Thunder Bluff

Services to Silvermoon: Sun Priestess/Holy Caste.
Envoy to Thunder Bluff
Envoy to The Red Jackals

Has provided her skills to aid the following organisations and persons:
Lord Alaister Vigil
The Dragon Slayers
The Remnants of The Essence
xxx xxxxx xx xxxxxx xxxxxxx


"Some of the information has been censored."

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Name: Setharoth Shadowhand

Grey market businessman. Continuous investigations from The Order have produced no evidence of crime. The Order are currently monitoring the proprietor Keelen Sheets in Silvermoon Bazaar.

"No further information is held"

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 Post subject: Re: Sorienna Archrion. "For The Greater Good!"
PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2011 12:23 pm 
((Very nice description, I love the attention to detail and the uniqueness and imperfection of your character. Well done :D If I may ask, where do you get the elvish names from, or do you just make them up? ))

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 Post subject: Re: Sorienna Archrion. "For The Greater Good!"
PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2011 12:47 pm 
Sorienna was one I made up, it's partly based on the Japanese for sky and some tacked on letters to make it sound elvish ^^

Kelu Melethraes and Nirenya Ros'Vorontir were patched together from LOTR languages ;)

The rest of the names, including Archrion are from other players.

:) and thank you. Most of it all happened in game too, which was fun. I am resisting the urge to spam my stories here.... for now.

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 Post subject: Re: Sorienna Archrion. "For The Greater Good!"
PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2011 5:42 pm 
Cool! I remember a Geis posting a lot on the Sha'tar forums, is it the same one? Also is there a database somewhere of LOTR names and such? I would like to come up with a nice last name for my blood elf as well :)

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 Post subject: Re: Sorienna Archrion. "For The Greater Good!"
PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2011 8:09 pm 
Yeps this is Geis' wiki page http://theshatareu.wikia.com/wiki/Geis_Archrion


And these are the pages I used for the LOTR stuff :)

Dictionary: http://councilofelrond.com/modules.php?op=modload&name=Dictionary&file=index

Elvish Name Database: http://councilofelrond.com/modules.php?op=modload&name=Semantics&file=index

The the words I've used are mixed and matched to what I think sounds nice ^^

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